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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Never mind Palesine


الجرح النازف
08-06-2008, 01:58 PM
Never mind Palestine

You are going to be fri

today or tommorrow

Never mind Palestine

my children and my love died

for your freedom

Never mind Palesine

Iam staying far away from you

Fucken occupation and to the hill War

Never minde Palestine

Iam living in the cold

Iam die everyday

everynight

i want to be back

its enough

Never mind Palestine

I love you

بقلمي
اعذوروني اذا في اخطاء

YâŖâ
08-06-2008, 02:22 PM
Nice Poem

Thanx A LoT

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Your sister

yara

Đαℓуα
08-06-2008, 06:11 PM
جد حلوة

يسلمو اخي،،

يعطيك العافية,,

داليآ

شب قدسي
09-06-2008, 11:35 AM
nice try I Liked your poem
and I have same situation I trying write poem's
but not success and failed
God bless all

الجرح النازف
09-06-2008, 11:10 PM
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دمعه على خدود القمر
10-06-2008, 06:20 PM
شعر عن فلسطين ما في اخطاء مو شكرا كتير على الشعر تحياتي مليسا

حلا فلسطين
10-06-2008, 06:24 PM
Thank you

so much

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7amdaneya
19-06-2008, 09:13 PM
thank you sweety for these great words
as a first writing
you are good
i hope you go on
:D
and never mind for the mistakes ///;)

الجرح النازف
26-06-2008, 03:55 PM
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